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Message non lupar ttomattoma » 02 Nov 2014, 21:57

Bonsoir, j'ouvre ce sujet pour déposer de manière progressive, les épisodes d'une histoire que je dessine et qui est publiée dans le fanzine Pamplemousse, des éditions Cambrousse.

Le premier épisode que je vais déposer date de 2012. Au fur et à mesure que les numéros avancent, il devient plus dur de les rendre accessibles. Aussi, pensant à une réédition un jour, je suis dit qu'il pourrait être intéressant d'avoir des retours au sujet de la perception du travail qui pourraient par exemple donner des axes sur lesquels retravailler à l'occasion d'une mise à jour.

N'hésitez donc pas à me livrant votre sentiment. Merci beaucoup !

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Message non lupar lucief » 03 Nov 2014, 10:54

J'adore l'ambiance de tes planches à Suivre !
Mon site perso : http://www.lucief.fr/
Mon FaceBook pour les dessins : https://www.facebook.com/luciefart
Mon DeviantArt : http://luciehyef.deviantart.com/
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Re: À Mer

Message non lupar Fred'O » 03 Nov 2014, 17:47

J'aime bien moi aussi l'ambiance (l)

Pour les remarques: je trouve que les cases 3 et 4 de la page 2,sont presque en trop. J'aurais aussi supprimé le dialogue "dites" et transféré le deuxième dialogue sur la dernière case

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Message non lupar duphot » 18 Jan 2015, 17:33

J'aime bien...
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